My First REAL Post..

Hey everyone this is something I just came up with...Might think its corny or might think its good...whatever...Its all YOUR thoughts!!
BTW this is the epilogue of a series im doing. its based on the game Dawn Of War. google it

Kronus

Bolter, Daemon and burning sky,
Sacrifice for Khorne;
As each of the light or dark falls,
Another beleiver is born;

Heretic, Mutant and burning alien,
Succumb to vile fate;
The holy god-emperor looks upon them,
Renewed is their faith;

Green,Brown and for a WAAAGH!
Da Orks come to stay;
Dem humie heads beneath the boot,
More Boyz come each day;

Pysker,Karskin nad Titan Imperator,
The Emperor's hammer comes down;
But without the cracking whip,
The mighty gun turns around;

Dust,Death and Decaying Metal,
Awoken from eternal slumber;
Arise in the service of the Nightbringer,
Once mighty Necrontyr;

Young,Swift and Fanatic Faith,
Facing down many foes;
Fighting for the Greater Good,
Tau deliver the killing blow;

Of old allegiance,Empire,Race,
Have seen the blight of the Nightbringer;
Only Farseer wise,Uthwalde,kept sane,
Chosen by Khaine's Fiery Finger;

Death,Fire and Might of Kronus,
Seven,vying for prize;
Flame,Haterd and Dead Men Walking,
Seen through many eyes;